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I Wrote An Entire Season - Interest Reading


First, I realize I am not a great writer, and have no idea how to submit a treatment to any one company or individual. But, I wrote a 14 Episode treatment called 'Heritage'.

I would like to post what I have written on here for your feedback. Now I know some of you are thinking "why would you want to post on here?" Well, I respect what people have to say, even if what they say may hurt or be untrue.

Also, who knows maybe the shows creators, OR, some other type of television producer/creator reads it and thinks, wow, this could 'possibly' be something.

What I would like to do is post the beginning of each episode (i.e. the first 30-50 pages). And also, post them out of order. Each episode is titled as a number. For instance, my first post may be titled '1', but it IS NOT the real first episode.

The season is written like an is a puzzle in itself, meaning, I want YOU to tell me the order you think it should be in. Now, I also have tried to incorporate hints of a connection to the other seasons.

As I wrote this story I try and describe the characters in it to reflect actors from previous A.H.S. Seasons. So, at the beginning of "A.H.S. - Heritage" I have a list of characters I will be happy to put the actors I envisioned in the roll.

So, in closing I will tell you my idea for "American Horror Story - Heritage" actually it went through a couple different names. "Lineage", "Family", & "The Web". It was a hard toss up between "Heritage" & "Lineage", and maybe you all can tell me what fits better. The story is basically about a group of people who are drawn together to a sleepy, eerie, and mysterious town in Minnesota called Red Lake Falls.

The town is filled with various characters that are interconnected together through history and time like an elaborate spiders web. And lying just on the outskirts of town is a venomous family whose bloodline has been altering humankind not behind closed doors, but for all to see, on the dark web.

Sometimes the things you see online are real...


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Start shopping around for a script agent. That's the first step to getting your work seen by the right people.



Handymen, Earl. We are handy-men!

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I'm unable to read this yet but I will. It's great to see positive and constructive comments because you don't see that often (seems like the anonymity of the internet brings out the worst in people at times like this just because they can be rude... even the guy who didn't like it READ IT, you're rockin' it all the way around-good job!).

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