"almost zero dialogue"
I'm not sure why people always cite this as if that makes a film less good. If you understand the narrative, then what do you need the dialogue for? "If you don't have anything to say, don't say anything at all" type of attitude except if your characters don't have anything to add that you can't express visually, then don't reiterate it.
As for the pacing, I agree it could have used a bit of tightening up in a few spots. I think if it was too tightened up, it wouldn't have had the same impact. In certain scenes, the slowness gave me time to really embrace how dull their life was in Oklahoma, just stuck between trips to Sonic and grocery stores - the romantic love of France had faded as it does with most relationships as it transforms into another kind of love, but which did not happen with Neil and Marina.
But then in other scenes, it felt redundant. I can give examples, but it'd be hard to explain without showing. One such spot is between their arrival in the US and Marina brushing her teeth haha.*
* If that means anything to anyone, they might see how there was three shots that were not necessary and redundant. But then again, the transition between the two might not have worked... but I think the sequence could have been tightened and kept the same effect.
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