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my movie idea?

posted 4 years ago by e3e34ifj (1912)
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so i have an idea for a movie i want to write. i begun writing it a week ago and am 3 pages in, but i am new to this so please help me

it is about a high school kid name Marty McKonnrad. he is bullied in high school because he is a gamer and conservative and a idk people just bully him and a girl rejects him and laughs at him. he is looked down on by society. one day he sees a meteor strike the fields and he goes to investiage and touches the rock and gains weird powers. he can now transform into a tiger-like creature i call a tigod, but he can also turn into a really hot woman with big boobs and blonde hair who can shoot magic. he only has the power in these two forms but not in normal form. the girl who rejected him also touches the rock and now has a cat tail and is eviler than before. Marty gets vengeance at school and slaughters everone who wronged him, while the crush he had fights him but he overpowers and he has sex with her like he always wanted. but the sex is so good that she falls in love and raelizes she should have just said yes the first time. marty also fights crime.

so what else should i do? thank you so much :)

[–] Kowalski (75523) 4 years ago

"he can also turn into a really hot woman with big boobs and blonde hair who can shoot magic"

LMAO...AMAZING...I WOULD WATCH YOUR MOVIE.

[–] MovieManCin2 (26342) 4 years ago

It's a cinematic goldmine, baby! Get to Hollyweird ASAP!

😎

[–] ColumboKate (5678) 4 years ago

You want to write a story about glorifying rape?

Trust me, no woman would ever think rape is the best sex she ever had 🤯

[–] TriumphReq (1857) 3 years ago

I didn't read that far to read where he wrote that. So basically op is a criminal wannabe.

[–] BullSchmidt (3189) 3 years ago

> no woman would ever think rape is the best sex she ever had

Ever read Ayn Rand's The Fountainhead? There's a part where the protagonist, Howard Roark, and a young woman, Dominique Francon, have been flirting with each other. She's mixed up and doesn't know what she wants out of life, including in this case -- she wants him and doesn't want him at the same time. He rapes her and she falls in love with him.

Overall it's a good book, but you've gotta hold your nose at that part. I can only guess that Rand had some sick fantasies, but no woman who had ever been raped or had known a rape victim would ever write crap like that.

[–] R_Kane (15828) 4 years ago

The first thing you should do is not put your story ideas in a public forum where someone who knows how to write a film script can take them.

[–] Stratego (30497) 4 years ago

Forget about Caitlyn Jenner as governor of California, you'd get my vote instead!

[–] Otter (24464) 4 years ago

Excellent Supervillain origin story!

[–] DoctorThirteen (13920) 3 years ago

Kinda reminds of Chronicle. Just a little bit.

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[–] e3e34ifj (1912) 4 years ago

i also have an idea where Marty cannot stay in his woman form for too long or else he will forcibly transform into the tigod form without any controll. he cannot control his actions as a tigod if this happens so he could like kill his family and wake up the next morning not knowing what ahppened. obviously being the hot woman would be awesome but it takes control to not stay in that form for to long.

also i think i will change marty name to kyle or chris. marty is the guy from back to the future which is an amazing movie but i do not want to get sued.

thoughts?