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Thank you. I continued the BL story w/ additional comments.
Daisy scurries off stage again just as the MC, still a bit shaken from the hit he took w/ the sandbags, walks out of his dressing room. He sees Daisy about the leave the theater and calls out to her, “Wait, I understand this is for you” and gives her the $10 bill for first prize. He continues “I know the noblest Roman of them all would want you to have this.”
Daisy’s surprised and grateful turns to wave thanks to Spanky who is still frozen on the stage. We also get a nice lingering shot of Kitty and Daisy’s Mom alone on stage wearing only their lingerie for all to see.
Daisy has grown due to the events of the evening and calls out to her mother.
“Mom don’t worry about me. I can get home by myself.”
Daisy skips out of the theater with her first prize money in hand hearing the sounds of raucous laughter from the audience and seeing her Mom and Kitty still on stage desperately using their hands trying to cover up to no avail. Daisy knows they will have more difficulty getting home than she will when they have to leave the theater dressed only in their underwear.
Angry, Kitty reaches toward to Daisy with her hand gesturing that Daisy needs to mind her manners. Daisy pushes Kitty’s hand away and leans back while she is still hugging her Mom. Kitty’s finely manicured nails rub past Daisy’s mom’s coat and snags her dress. With Kitty’s nails going one way and Daisy pulling away in the opposite direction on her Mom’s coat we hear another loud ripping sound as Daisy’s Mom’s coat and dress are torn off in different directions.
As Daisy's Mom has her dress ripped off Kitty falls forward a bit and knocks over the props so now for the audience still in the theater the view is twice as nice.
Kitty in a full-length slip with lacy bodice and hem. The theater lights penetrate the slip, so the audience also gets the pleasure of seeing her wearing a matching bra, panty, and garter-belt set with the garter-belt securely supporting her sexy seamed stockings.
Daisy’s Mom is now frozen in place as the laughter and catcalls reach a new crescendo. As the kind and sensible woman she is, she can now be seen by all standing there on stage only wearing her nice floral print matching bra and panty set w/ lace insets and a fetching pair of control-top pantyhose.
The audience which has been filing out stops and turns around when it hears the loud ripping of the fabrics and the shrieks from Daisy's Mom as she too is now on stage clad only in her lingerie. Among the audience you see broad smiles, renewed laughter and some taking a seat again for the encore.
One guy who was walking out with w/ a friend grabs his friend's shoulder and turning him around to face the stage says “hey buddy let’s stick around for the second act”
Yes, you're right one of the other mothers on stage would come to the aid of Kitty. maybe something like this:
Kitty is behind the prop and gaping at her dress in the rafters. Spanky remains stunned and frozen. The audience is filing out because the view of Kitty they want is obscured by the prop. Off stage Daisy Dimple’s mother remember Spanky’s promise to Daisy to give her the $10 he expects to win and the MC saying to Daisy “Listen honey, he won that prize five minutes ago.” Because of the generous gesture Daisy’s Mom figures she should help Kitty out of her predicament. She intends to give Kitty her coat.
Daisy’s Mom walks on stage w/ Daisy in tow. Daisy still a little freaked out from her appearance on stage walks close to her Mother hugging her Mom’s coat because of her unsettling experience.
Daisy’s Mom walks up to Kitty and looking down at her says she wants to help her out so she can leave the stage w/o any further embarrassment. Daisy’s Mom says she is doing so because of Spanky’s kind gesture. Daisy chimes in saying “the dress is in the bag”
Because of all the noise and laughter from the audience Kitty hears what Daisy says and thinks Daisy is making a smart-aleck remark about her dress being ripped off her in front of a full theater with it now up in the theater's rafters while she's left on stage fully displayed in her finest lingerie for all to see.
Thank you. Yes, I think a three-camera technique would improve the viewer experience. The chance to see Kitty and her struggle to keep her dress on, the view from the audience and those in the wings as the dress is being lifted and her face as she looks at those looking at her. I'm a big lingerie fan so seeing her in various garments would be great. I want to see what the audience sees, Kitty disrobed in her undergarments, before Spanky comes out w/ the prop.
Another improvement to the viewer's experience; Spanky should spend more time looking for and locating the prop, so we get more of Kitty from the audiences' and backstage view. As you say, seeing her expressions as the dress is being lifted off, more of her struggles from more angles and then her expressions with the dress completely off and thoroughly humiliated would add w/o changing the experience for those who prefer classic BL.
I had another thought on what may be called the utter chaos version of BL. As the audience is filing out one member lifts up his wife, girlfriend, or a stranger's dress as far as possible asking "What are you wearing under your dress?" to the enjoyment of those filing out who get a glimpse again of a pretty lady and the sexy lingerie she wears and for all we know she may even hope that complete strangers get a glimpse of what she's wearing under her dress.
Part Two
Meanwhile, we know Kitty is on stage and Spanky, trying to help, only adds to her humiliation w/ the dog prop.
A stagehand who isn’t paying much attention to anything sees Kitty’s coat she earlier tossed to the side. Thinking it’s a from the costume department he picks it up and being a fur locks it in the dressing room.
With her dress in the rafters and coat now locked away Kitty has to leave the theater with only what she has on if anything.
Of course, the howling of the audience never ends. Spanky is stunned and frozen in place
Grandma doesn’t come to the aid of her daughter. She helps the MC back to his dressing room.
Kitty finally runs off stage. The other stage mothers have left w/ their kids. Kitty leaves through a back door but needs to get home; she doesn’t drive. She runs up the alley to the front of the theater and at a cab stand asks the attendant to hail a cab.
The attendant say he will but she must wait her turn there are others ahead of her. She is left standing on the street in all stages of undress. Meanwhile the audience leaving the theater is getting a good look at her, a good laugh at her expense, and a great memory.
And to preserve it all the photographers for local newspapers who were covering the talent show are snapping photos with the flash bulbs and flash powder illuminating Kitty as she tries desperately to cover up in front of the leering theatergoers and passer-bys.
Part One
I first saw Beginners Luck when I was 4. I was hooked, pun intended. I remember watching it on TV, my mother calling me for dinner and I say just a minute because Kitty Kelly just took off her coat and was going to pull Spanky off the stage. Watching her dress be pulled off instead was great. It still is all these years later. After seeing it on TV I would recreate the scene w/ a friend down the street. The setting was an office and when the pencil sharpener was used the clothes came off. We got caught by my friend’s Mom but nothing was ever said about it.
I’d love to see a recreation but I’d add a little more to the production.
The recreation should be w/ three cameras positioned from the audience, from Grandma and the MC, and from the behind. The cameras will move a bit to cover every angle of the big reveal.
The recreation can follow the original script with some additional action.
W/ modern production techniques I think it would be easy for Kitty Kelly to be revealed in all combinations of lingerie: full, half and demi slips; bras including long line and strapless; waistcinchers: open bottom, panty and longleg; girdles open bottom, panty and longleg, garterbelts, basques, corsets, pantyhose, thigh high stockings even nude. On a DVD the viewer can pick and choose.
Grandma always announces “Here’s where we stop the show” The MC responds “Go ahead” I would add to the chaos.
After the curtain sandbags hit the MC he looks up at the disrobed Kitty. He is groggy and thinks he is reaching for the curtain to help him get up for an even better look at Kitty. Instead, he grabs onto the coat of one the mothers in the wings of the stage. Sure enough her coat and dress are also ripped off and she is left standing there in any of the lingerie combinations above. She screams as she quickly looks around while trying to cover up and sees all the other contestants, stage mothers and stagehands looking at her and enjoying her plight. Grandma suggests she join Kitty on stage. Of course, she can’t.
She asks a stagehand where the exit is. He replies, "I dunno". She's left frantically scampering all over the backstage desperately looking for an exit dressed only in her beautiful lingerie much to the enjoyment and satisfaction of the snickering contestants, their tittering stage mothers and chuckling stagehands. All three groups are lucky enough to be positioned in the stage wings and able watch the completely mortified stage mom scurry about as one of the contestants gleefully blurts "Look, she's in her undies!!" before she finally finds an exit and leaves.