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posted a year ago by demolition (214)
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Are any of you fan fiction writers out there?

As of the movie sequel announced on Star Wars Day here is a link with the fan fiction that should be back stories and fan fiction that are back story and side story on the rebels.

There are also casting thoughts to characters in the fan fiction that us fans created.

http://boards.theforce.net/threads/demolition-man-entries.50015706/

This fan fiction was written long before James Gandolfini and Dennis Farina died in real life. There were 2 scraps written out. Also Tony Lipp and Robert Loggia died in real life but could've considered them 1 decade after Demolition Man came out as Dominic's bodyguards who get killed by Simon Phoenix. There could've been actors reprising roles from the first films in the prequels.

There are 4 links below with Demolition Man Fan Fiction on the non Star Wars Fan Fiction board for stories.

Story - Demolition Man Entries | Jedi Council Forums (theforce.net)

Demolition man 1st Prequel

https://boards.theforce.net/threads/demolition-man-entries.50015706/#post-51064521

Demolition Man 2nd Prequel

https://boards.theforce.net/threads/demolition-man-entries.50015706/#post-51064526

Demolition Man 3rd Prequel

Here's the first version of the rebellion side story with some changes on the post ending fan fiction.

https://boards.theforce.net/threads/demolition-man-entries.50015706/#post-51064532

2 Sequels Original Version

https://boards.theforce.net/threads/demolition-man-entries.50015706/#post-51064535

Demolition Man Scraps Side Stories and Post Ending Version Two

https://boards.theforce.net/threads/demolition-man-entries.50015706/#post-56918269

The Fan Fiction based on the ideas for the Sequel announced on Star Wars Day 2020 to make up the trilogy.

https://boards.theforce.net/threads/demolition-man-entries.50015706/#post-58383850

Real Side Story and Post Ending that should Retcon scenes Cut Out of the original movie leading into the Sequel with prequel story of Edgar Friendly and the Scraps.

https://boards.theforce.net/threads/demolition-man-entries.50015706/#post-58383940

Here’s what really, really, really should retcon scenes cut out and go in between the movie post ending and proposed sequel on May 4, 2020 (Star Wars Day).

https://boards.theforce.net/threads/demolition-man-entries.50015706/#post-58386425

https://archiveofourown.org/tags/Demolition%20Man%20(1993)/works

A sequel to this film was announced on May 4, 2020, Star Wars Day. Maybe some battles of CryoCons who got away with them not killed or incapacitated like survivors of Simon Phoenix’s gang. Maybe CryoCons who survived gaining DNA of Simon Phoenix like digging up frozen remains as its CryoCon Elvin (played by Rhino Michaels). Even CryoCon cloning. Demolition Man 2 could be cancelled but there are for tales or entries in between Demolition Man and the sequel.

https://www.fanfiction.net/forums/movie/Demolition-Man/

https://www.fanfiction.net/forum/General-Discussion/4954/

https://www.fanfiction.net/topic/4954/4832652/1/Fandom-Thoughts-and-Writers-Out-there

https://www.fanfiction.net/communities/movie/Demolition-Man/

Here’s from both demolition18 and 3 other fans as not crossover fan fiction…

Bon Appetit

https://www.fanfiction.net/s/4424354/1/Bon-Appetit

A Moment Like This

https://www.fanfiction.net/s/5878901/1/A-Moment-Like-This

A Little Phoenix

https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12593008/1/A-Little-Pheonix

https://archiveofourown.org/tags/Demolition%20Man%20(1993)/works

[–] demolition (214) a year ago

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[–] demolition (214) a year ago

Here are below other ideas for us and maybe fan writers below. Here’s for them…

Prequel Set One

There could be times when John Spartan arrested a thousand criminals in over 3 years with allot more business in various times. Those are ideas for short stories and us fans could write them backstories on John Spartan before 1993. There might be some criminals who get redeemed and get descent jobs and others who could join criminal gangs. He could discover many of the criminals he took down going to there. There should be hundreds of criminals John Spartan and his allies arrested that get sprung by Henry Yates and Simon Phoenix with the criminal friends of Simon Phoenix and Adam is just a random gang member to both Henry Yates and Simon Phoenix who's believed to be the toughest criminal. There could be John Spartan and company taking on loan sharks like arresting them.

Prequel Set Two

There might even be criminals that John Spartan took down on the LA PD who had redemption and newer criminals rise in LA like after Simon Phoenix's criminal empire are all dead or in cryo-prison frozen with the organized crime rivals all whacked out. Also then John Spartan and Simon Phoenix themselves are frozen and Simon Phoenix got away with perjury as John Spartan unable to prove innocent. There could even be Franchise Wars in this leading up to Taco Bell being the only fast food restaurant when the main characters are frozen. Also on Kodo killing FBI Agent Glenn Andre on the Yakuza investigation.

Prequel Set Three

There could be Franchise Wars in this based on the commercials for Taco Bell. There could even be Franchise Wars in this leading up to Taco Bell being the only fast-food restaurant when the main characters are frozen. There could also be the story of the parole system rendered obsolete. This is when John Spartan's friends deal with dirty cops and no proof on him framed. They suspect a corrupt system. There could even from the Franchise Wars and parole system be backstories on Lenina Huxley.
Those links are backstory entries to the movie and there’s the side story fan fiction. The more what should be official are those 3 links. Also 2 other links both sequel and side story.

Demolition man 1st Prequel

https://boards.theforce.net/threads/demolition-man-entries.50015706/#post-5106452

Demolition Man 2nd Prequel

https://boards.theforce.net/threads/demolition-man-entries.50015706/#post-51064526

Demolition Man 3rd Prequel

Here's the first version of the rebellion side story with some changes on the post ending fan fiction.

Now comes the fan fiction based on my ideas for the writers of the Demolition Man sequel.

https://boards.theforce.net/threads/demolition-man-entries.50015706/#post-58386425

[–] demolition (214) 3 months ago

Here is the ideas for this film. Let's hope the writers go with what the fans want. This is for a fan fiction club and let the writers get the credit and we know fan fiction has to be non-profitable.

This should be in the 100 years after John Spartan was born in 2058 AD or 2062 AD to start out. There should be John Spartan going after Elvin finding him with some other men. Elvin talks to those other thugs of together with Mac killing Edgar Friendly outcasts Jason and Ryan recently. This is before John Spartan shows up and battles those members of the Phoenix gang. There are a few of them shot down before John Spartan has the epic gun fight with Elvin as John Spartan as the berretta drawn and fights Elvin as Elvin has Uzis. It’s at a dock. John Spartan yells out “Yo Elvin” and “Yeah I know it’s you” getting into a gun fight. John Spartan in the gun fight with Elvin shoots the electric box. He manages to shoot Elvin in the belly on the armor sending him into the electric box. Elvin is electrocuted to how he dies. It’s a shipment of illegal drugs and cigarettes just as vaping it outlawed but invented not that long before San Angeles. After killing Elvin and some other old criminals John Spartan meets with California governor Gus Hawkins and his right-hand man the secret offspring of Simon Phoenix going by Mac with Dr. Ronny Blade. It was Gus Hawkins with Ronnie Blade working for Raymond Cocteau until he was killed. The illegal drugs are blown up around him. Wayne Henderson fires on John Spartan. John Spartan fires back shooting Wayne Henderson in the head killing him. They discover all those years that Simon Phoenix was cloned. This is just before that John Spartan goes to arrest this corrupt doctor at his lab. Joey Spartan is a rookie of the San Angeles Police force.

There are years of investigation of this criminal mastermind. Gus Hawkins is the next of Raymond Cocteau and thinks he controls the criminal army that cloned Simon Phoenix and plotted to eliminate John Spartan. It was for political gain as John Spartan was destructive. Over this time Gus Hawkins rises to power and has a new Cocteau administration. There should be John Spartan eating at Taco Bell with Gus Hawkins as he has with him Lenina Huxley the deputy police chief and Captain Alfredo Garcia. During Taco Bell there is John Spartan’s family accompanying like his daughter Katherine who’s divorced long ago and has 2 daughters born 2 years apart. Also, with Lenina Huxley-Spartan John Spartan has the son named Joe and a daughter named Melissa. Gus Hawkins is looking to run for president for the 2068 election.

John Spartan and Lenina Huxley Spartan in the 2060’s earlier in that decade have their son Joey and a promoted office now detective Sierra Hauser going after Ronnie Blade. There are 2 others that turned their backs on the rebels going by Freddy and Buster. At this lab those cops appear and have a gun fight with Freddy and Buster. John Spartan kills Freddy while Joey Spartan kills Buster in the gun fight. They all together arrest Dr. Ronnie Blade on his charges just before finding out of Gus Hawkins having the Simon Phoenix clone as a pawn for political power and bring back the Cocteau like society. That’s first the US and then the world.

There should be scenes of humor too in it and scenes of Simon Phoenix clone and the mystery offspring of Simon Phoenix. They talk of killing Gus Hawkins and conspirators to him as they have the goal to spread chaos. The Simon Phoenix clone has the memory of the real Simon Phoenix having Adam kill Raymond Cocteau as of unable to pull the trigger on him. Gus Hawkins meets up with the Clone Simon Phoenix. Gus Hawkins has a plot to eliminate John Spartan for political gain but also eliminate Edgar Friendly and his freedom fighting band. Simon Phoenix clone and Simon Phoenix Jr. meet up with Gus Hawkins.

It leads into John Spartan finding out his classic nemesis Simon Phoenix had been cloned as a corrupt business man his is mystery offspring born in the 1990’s. The mother is unknown. Simon Phoenix clone plots to kill Gus Hawkins and his 8 person council meeting up with the remaining army of CryoCons.

It’s Gus Hawkins taking over the world for peace when he’s a dictator that wants to kill John Spartan for political power. Those who served him work for Mac. John Spartan learns of Gus Hawkins plotting to kill him for political gain as was plotted by usurping criminal master mind Ronny Blade also the right-hand man of Gus Hawkins along with his crew of 3 women and 5 men. They learn of this stuff.

[–] demolition (214) 3 months ago

This should take place most in 2068. In the ideas there's a plot by Gus Hawkins to kill John Spartan for political gain with also order the killing of Edgar Friendly and his top scrap fighters. They should be played by Carlton Wilborn and Jack Black. That's with Mac and the council of Gus Hawkins. Later on, Mac meets up with the clone Simon Phoenix and the criminals unfrozen by Simon Phoenix back in 2032 just before Ronny Blade and the rest of the CryoCons unfrozen by Simon Phoenix 30 years earlier go to attack the police station. Mac takes a band of CryoCons to the police station and to attack. At the police station Detective Sierra Hauser talks of men and women turning their backs on the new Phoenix Gang. Simon Phoenix clone plots to kill them as he found out.

There should be a battle of John Spartan and company incapacitating 5 of Simon Phoenix's goons. Lenina Huxley states to John Spartan that the Cocteau killer Adam was knocked out by the resistance force after the tough cop played by Troy Evans struck him with the stun baton as Edgar Friendly and his armed followers talked of killing 5 more of Simon Phoenix's goons back then when John Spartan killed the original Simon Phoenix as Lenina Huxley had shown up after that battle. There are talks that they suspect Simon Phoenix clone of killing the scraps played by Ken Baldwin and Michael Buice. Lenina Huxley states that the 2 who knocked out CryoCon Adam as he was one of those she had gone after were killed by either Elvin or the Simon Phoenix clone or a band of CryoCons that reported to Elvin. John Spartan talks of killing Elvin at the time of going onto 100 years after he was born.

The band of clone CryoCons go to the police station with Simon Phoenix Jr. and scientist Ronny Blade. There are very young rebels both male and female on the way who got out of the gang that answered to Elvin and joined Edgar Friendly's freedom fighting band. Mac/Simon Phoenix Jr. and the band of CryoCons fight them in a gun fight. They shoot them down killing them. There should be scenes at the Police Station as Alfredo Garcia throws Erwin the veteran dispatcher to the ground when the CryoCons attack by firing. There are cops that fire back as does John Spartan, Lenina Huxley-Spartan, Edgar Friendly, Carl and the other armed followers of Edgar Friendly like who was played by Jack Black. They get shot and killed. Alfredo Garcia in front of the veteran dispatcher Erwin fires back.

Mac also fires on John Spartan and company. Detective Sierra Hauser and Joey Spartan get into a gun fight. John Spartan kills the rest of the CryoCons with bullets in Mac/Simon Phoenix Jr. killing him to. There was learning from Ronny Blade in custody of the Simon Phoenix clone hidden all those years as of the frozen remains of Simon Phoenix were recovered in the cryo-prison in ruins just as Ronny Blade is arrested.

There should be at the San Angeles public library to when 2 police cruisers flying by land there finding the clone Simon Phoenix. One is carrying the squad leader with a woman member and the other carries 2 other men. The clone Simon Phoenix remarks his going to love running this place There are 4 cops who find the Clone Simon Phoenix. They are 3 men and one woman. They fight him in a gun fight. The Simon Phoenix clone kills those cops. There are reports to cops and rebels like to John Spartan and Edgar Friendly that there were rebels and cops slaughtered by the crime syndicate of 2060's San Angeles. He plots to kill those who betrayed him to join Edgar Friendly’s resistance force. There's the plot against Gus Hawkins to kill him with the men and women (8 people) to be slaughtered as well.

There should be Gus Hawkins talking of with his crew banning unhealthy products and taking guns out of the city again along with tattoos and body piercings illegal as would be alcohol, caffeine, contact sports and meat. Profanity would be outlawed while those morality boxes are to be brought back and John Spartan with Edgar Friendly are his top targets of elimination using criminals.

John Spartan and team depart for the San Angeles Science Center meeting up with Edgar Friendly and his top freedom fighters played by Carlton Wilborn and Jack Black in the 1993 movie. John Spartan puts Detective Sierre Hauser on patrol of San Angeles with other patrol officers. Joey Spartan has a handgun and shot gun and is to with his parents fight to end the Phoenix Gang.

There is that John Spartan manages to incapacitate some CryoCons at the Schwarzenegger Presidential Library just as he killed the offspring of Simon Phoenix and some friends to him killed by the rebels. There should be a scene when the clone Simon Phoenix is found and kills some cops that report to John Spartan and Lenina Huxley-Spartan.

[–] demolition (214) 3 months ago

They talk of underground people killed also. With surviving CryoCons arrested along with Gus Hawkins his accomplices are under investigation. From the conspirators of Gus Hawkins John Spartan manages to locate Simon Phoenix’s clone with the rest of the CryoCon henchmen. The clone Simon Phoenix has memories of the original Simon Phoenix and plots to clone others killed long ago to create a new criminal army with cloning henchmen killed at the main headquarters of the SA PD. John Spartan sends the officers on the search for the criminals out there.

This is later on that the clone Simon Phoenix with the remaining CryoCon henchmen of Simon Phoenix have an arsenal of guns big and small. There’s a flashback to retcon a scene cut out to when Simon Phoenix kills Zachry Lamb on the streets of San Angeles. It’s after the car chase to when Zachary Lamb tries to bring down Simon Phoenix. He’s shot to death. Cryocons Adam, Francis, Danzig and Elvin meet up with Simon Phoenix heading over to Cocteau Industries. It was shown long ago that Simon Phoenix freeing the criminal army slaughtered the guards of the cryo-prison and then gunned the techs to death. Back to the earlier 2060’s. From Simon Phoenix’s clone there’s the plot to kill the mayor of San Angeles along with deputy mayor and kill John Spartan and Edgar Friendly but also clone those killed at the police station battle and others killed long ago to form a criminal army. It’s a big building with a gun battle. John Spartan, Lenina Huxley-Spartan, Joey Spartan, Edgar Friendly, Alfredo Garcia and the armed scraps Carl and Jackie get into gun battle against Simon Phoenix and the remains of his gang. John Spartan shoots down some gang members in the battle. The Clone Simon Phoenix finds of the offspring of Simon Phoenix killed at the police station attack. John Spartan equips with guns and a machine gun/rocket launcher combo but a berretta holstered for back up in the final battle. Lenina Huxley and John Spartan are riding the back Alfredo Garcia driving the car with Joey Spartan riding shotgyun. The remaining villains are found at the San Angeles Science Center. Edgar Friendly and the Spartans evacuate the science center just before Simon Phoenix clone and his gang along come in. It's the science center on a floor to when John Spartan and allies battle the Simon Phoenix clone and the remaining CryoCons to when Alfredo Garcia is killed in battle.

There should be the battle when Simon Phoenix clone and the rest of the CryoCon henchmen finding John Spartan and company with memories of the original Simon Phoenix. He says "let's take them boys". John Spartan and company are prepared this time and they fire back. This is reference to the Wasteland battle back in 2032 after the original Simon Phoenix sprung 7 CryoCons. John Spartan in the building shoots a rocket into Simon Phoenix clone and blows up the rest of the cryocon henchmen as the clone Simon Phoenix is eliminated by explosion. He blows up a part of the building but there’s the fire suppression system as the rest of the criminals are killed.

[–] demolition (214) 3 months ago

There should be talked about CryoCon Elvin killed a couple of the scraps (played by Michael Buice and Ken Baldwin) while 2 scrap toughs were killed by the clone Simon Phoenix that weren't shown in the first film that believed to have killed Simon Phoenix's offspring Mac and Wayne Henderson before fighting Simon Phoenix's CryoCon henchmen. The talks of cryocons killed before showing up at the Cryo-Prison were Gunther, Howie, Jed, Ignatius and Reggie. Adam after struck by the tough cop's stun baton on the breast plates of his army is clobbered by Edgar Friendly with the hammer of the double-barreled pistol he still has that incapacitates CryoCon Adam that did the work for Simon Phoenix in killing Raymond Cocteau. The tough cop that Troy Evans portrayed as he was talked of sent on a mission by Chief Earle just after taking out Simon Phoenix's cryocon henchmen who attacked the library outside accompanied aby and under protection from scrap toughs Jason and Ryan. This should be talked of between John Spartan and Edgar Friendly. There are talks that John Spartan before taking on Elvin killed some others like the murder death killer of 2010 on the last recorded offensive along with Patrick Wilkes. If the rest of the cryocons that were still on ice were not eliminated by the cryo-prison blown up the explosion freed them and they fled to underground. They could then be cloned if so.

Ed Harris (Apollo 13, The Rock) as Gus Hawkins

Michael Beihn (The Terminator, The Abyss, The Rock) as Ronny Blade

Angus MacFayden (Warriors of Virtue, Equilibrium) as Mayor James Huxley, Jr.

Judson Mills (Walker Texas Ranger) as Deputy Mayor Jack Hensen.

Kim Coates (Innocent Blood, The Last Boyscout) as Wayne Henderson [Person from the future working for Simon Phoenix and other 6 cryocons he freed]

Maybe also Wesley Snipes as Mac/Simon Phoenix Jr.

In between bold on ideas for Peter M. Lenkov is above all for the movie beginning and ending.

There should be talked about CryoCon Elvin killed a couple of the scraps (played by Michael Buice and Ken Baldwin) while 2 scrap toughs were killed by the clone Simon Phoenix that weren't shown in the first film that believed to have killed Simon Phoenix's offspring Mac and Wayne Henderson before fighting Simon Phoenix's CryoCon henchmen. The talks of cryocons killed before showing up at the Cryo-Prison were Gunther, Howie, Jed, Ignatius and Reggie. Adam after struck by the tough cop's stun baton on the breast plates of his army is clobbered by Edgar Friendly with the hammer of the double-barreled pistol he still has that incapacitates CryoCon Adam that did the work for Simon Phoenix in killing Raymond Cocteau. The tough cop that Troy Evans portrayed as he was talked of sent on a mission by Chief Earle just after taking out Simon Phoenix's cryocon henchmen who attacked the library outside accompanied by and under protection from scrap toughs Jason and Ryan. This should be talked of between John Spartan and Edgar Friendly.

There are talks that John Spartan before taking on Elvin killed some others like the murder death killer of 2010 on the last recorded offensive along with Patrick Wilkes. If the rest of the cryocons that were still on ice were not eliminated by the cryo-prison blown up the explosion freed them and they fled to underground. They could then be cloned if so. Jason and Ryan are those 2 mentioned scrap fighters that the clone Simon Phoenix killed just as there was talked of that the Jesse Ventura character admitted to doing the work for Simon Phoenix to off Raymond Cocteau before knocked out by John Spartan’s allies when Lenina Huxley shows up as most of them head off to the cryo-prison. John Spartan is aware of the killing of Zachary Lamb back in 2032 and that it was CryoCon Adam who did the work for Simon Phoenix in killing Raymond Cocteau and before others have shown up at the cryo-prison John Spartan was aware of him knocked out and others who were in cut out scenes killed by John Spartan killed by Alfredo Garcia, Edgar Friendly and 4 other armed scraps in a gun fight just as Jesse Ventura’s character armed the cut out cryocons.

There’s all aware over those years Lenina Huxley incapacitated CryoCon Francis played by Ben Jurand and made her first kill on CryoCon Danzig played by Billy Lucas. John Spartan is aware now that 2 other cryocons threw the dead Raymond Cocteau into the fire and there’s no Jesse Ventura on board for a Demolition Man sequel as Warner Brothers won’t cast him anymore so maybe it’s unshown that John Spartan’s allies before coming to the Cryo-Prison incapacitated CryoCon Adam with Cryo Con Elvin still out there all those years and somehow learn Simon Phoenix was cloned. It appears in a cut out scene in Demolition Man Sylvester Stallone defeats Jesse Ventura incapacitating him after killing completely cut out CryoCons.

[–] demolition (214) 3 months ago

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This is updated. There are more fan fiction entries on archive our own then www.fanfiction.net on this movie.