One small change


"I will never ask you to do anything that I wouldn't do myself."

CUT

The closing shot right after the final line diffuses the tension way too much in my opinion.

I think movies tend to cut to credits too late. By contrast, Whiplash cuts to credits immediately after the climax and it's perfect.

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Agreed, it wouldn't make it a noticeablly better movie but any improvement is improvement.

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I'm not sure that it would fit with the vibe of the film, but interesting suggestion.

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