It started out great. I got a bit surprised when it turned out to be a musical, but I don't really mind it. Not all were great singers but that felt in line with the mood of the movie. It had a nice way of intertwining the different stories and all characters had different motivations. The characters weren't very bright, but it all made sense. The movie had me hooked for the first hour.
So, what went wrong? Why did I only give it 3 of 10?
Well; the characters fell apart; their actions stopped making sense and they stepped away from their archetypes. * The witch stopped having an impact on the story the moment she drank her potion; instead of the witch they brought along another antagonist - the giantess. This could have worked, but they kept the witch in the story a long time thus turning her into a pointless extra. Witches can be good, all that have seen Maleficent realize that a witch can have depth; she can turn good or turn bad. Turning is fine; because turning, if done properly, means character development, and character development drives the story. This witch didn't turn; she simply took a step back and simply lost all purpose. * Rapunzels prince: Felt a bit unnecessary to start with, but it completed the Rapunzel-storyline. Him turning blind however, was a bit of a stretch; and much like the witch he simple disappeared from the story; at least he wasn't kept as an extra, he simply disappeared without any reason or purpose. Had his entire storyline been cut nothing else in the movie would have to be changed. * Jack: He loves his cow we all get it. He was more upset over selling his cow than he was over hearing his mother was dead. The entire Jack-Mother relationship was forced and would have made sense in a story only as an example of how the evil mother gets what's coming to her; but she wasn't evil; she wasn't good... she almost wasn't... and then she died and simply disappeared. Jack did things that pushed the story ahead; but he lacked any depth or personality. He just did things. * The cow: Died, was brought back to life then left the story. Jack had a crush on the cow - why would anyone drop that storyline after spending so much time setting it up? It was plain stupid and yet another example of characters being dropped from the story. One might argue that the cow wasn't a "character", but then I would argue that the cow had more personality than both the princes together. But, like half the cast the cow-character disappeared from the story without a comment. * The bakers wife: The smart one of the dumb couple. All good and nice; what ruined her was her completely random making out scene with the prince. All the romance was for nothing; one random prince - screw the child, screw the husband she loved. Her betrayal made no sense; she had no reason to act like she did (sure, if the witch were still in play, but she wasn't). And after her storyline got messed up by inept script-writing she disappeared from the story. At least she was mentioned as having died (which caused the baker an entire 3 second emotional breakdown before turning back to normal) * The Cinderellas prince: A bit annoying perhaps, but all good. He acted in a "princely way". He chased down the princess to be in accordance with the story. What didn't make sense was the prince suddenly deciding to make out with the bakers wife. This was plain stupid, was given no explanations and didn't contribute to any character development whatsoever. After his betrayal he went to chase the giant and thus disappeared from the story. * The baker: Fairly dumb character; but that's how he was meant to be so that's fine. Didn't really do anything to drive the story; wasn't very compassionate about his wife (even if they had some songs together); didn't care much for his child or for his new friends. Spent 3 seconds being upset over his wife's demise. * The giantess: Was completely unnecessary; took over the witch's part in the story; was said to be a great menace and all. This was one of the few characters who had a real motivation; but as antagonists go it was fairly pointless and got killed very easily. The giant didn't even have a song - and this is supposed to be a musical!! * Little Red: This girl had personality. She wanted sweets and bread; so she wasn't all bad. She had some reactions and a fairly creative storyline including a visit to the wolves tummy. After the wolf she carried a knife and had some attitude. However, after her storyline was over she did like the witch; took a step back and just watched the show. Sure,she did some singing, but she didn't contribute the slightest.
The most annoying thing with this movie is that it could easily have been good. Just change this and that a bit; let the characters act a bit differently and the story could easily have been great. All the elements were there; the actors were good; the special effects and the songs could easily have worked; instead the character after character were left behind by the story. Entire subplots were dropped and forgotten.
I love twists and turns in movies; I love when characters surprise and change over the course of the movie... but this movie didn't have twists; it had subplots that were left to die; it didn't have characters that changed, it merely had characters that took a step back and stopped participating.
My guess is that the screenwriter got a few good ideas; didn't know how to finish any of them; decided to get drunk and accidentally sent the script to the director who shot the movie before the mistake could be rectified.
tl/dr but I do agree with general statement. It would be better if it stopped after the tasks were performed and bakers go their child. The giantess coming down felt like another story and was too serious to fit with baby storyline.
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You seem to have the notion that character need to be either all good or all bad, and the material makes it quite clear that people in real life aren't that way. The witch is not the antagonist of the first half. She's the closest we come to a "bad guy," but she's not a villain. It's shown that the way she treats Rapunzel is out of fear of losing her, which doesn't excuse her actions, but makes her at least a little sympathetic. There's no "turn," as you put it. There's nothing to show us that she's actually a good person or that she becomes a good person. She says it herself. "You're so nice. You're not good, you're not bad. You're just nice. I'm not good, I'm not nice. I'm just right." She's a much more complex character than simply a good guy or a bad guy or a bad guy turned good.
As far as Jack's relation with his mother... I don't see how you felt that he was more upset over the death of Milky White. The death of his mother got a song, the death of the cow got a few lines. The song reinforces the idea that people try to do the right thing and sometimes mess up. People make mistakes."Witches can be right, giants can be good. You decide what's right. You decide what's good." Jack's Mother is always trying to do the right thing under difficult circumstances, and she doesn't always succeed, but she tries. Similarly, the Steward does what he thinks is right when he pushes Jack's mother down, though in the stage play he actually silences her by whacking her on the head with his staff. He doesn't mean to kill her, but it's a tense moment and he feels the need to act fast in the best interest of the group..
The Baker' Wife's dalliance with Cinderella's Prince falls into a similar theme. She messes up and she realizes it. Cinderella's Prince from the beginning is more concerned with the chase than with the conquest. The film did not cover the time span that the play covers to allow us to see that all the characters become dissatisfied or disillusioned by their "happily ever after," but it's still in line with Cinderella's Prince and the thrill of the chase, as seen during the song "Agony." As for the Baker's Wife, she's always shown to be fascinated and a little titillated by royalty, so she's swept off her feet. Once it's over she knows she's messed up and at first tries to justify it ("Was that him? Yes it was. Was that me? No it wasn't."), but ultimately realizes that what's done is done and she has to take stock of what's really important ("Just remembering you've had an 'and' when you're back to 'or' makes the 'or' mean more than it did before. Now I understand, and it's time to leave the woods.") and go back to reality. Her tragedy is that as soon as she realizes her mistake and starts to head back to what's really important to her, she's killed.
These are all themes that are carefully woven throughout the piece, both the film and the stage play. You seemed to want either a traditional fairy tale or a fairy tale that simply showed another side. What you got instead was a fairy tale that forsook all fairy tale tropes and showed the characters instead as complex and flawed human beings. What you took as lack of character development (characters being neither fully good nor fully evil, making mistakes that don't seem to make sense in the moment, trying their hardest and still failing) is actually what makes them incredibly strong and developed characters.
I'm sorry you didn't like it, but this is a story that has been dissected for its complexity for approximately thirty years. It's not perfect and some things were condensed in the film that are explained in more detail in the play. But many devotees of the play feel that the movie did great justice to the property.
What makes you think that I object to characters being both good and bad? I very clearly wrote this about the witch: "Witches can be good, all that have seen Maleficent realize that a witch can have depth; she can turn good or turn bad. Turning is fine; because turning, if done properly, means character development, and character development drives the story."
According to wikipedia the word protagonist (from Ancient Greek πρωταγωνιστής (protagonistes), meaning "player of the first part, chief actor"); in this case without any doubt the baker and his wife (and perhaps Little red, Jack and so on). The antagonist is the character opposing or acting against the protagonist. Sure, often the antagonist is evil; but it's not required by any means.
The important thing with turning isn't "into what" but rather how. And as you say, she doesn't turn - prett much none of the characters change the slightest. Jacks mother dies and he merely reacts over it for a few seconds. A proper reaction would have been a tantrum having to be physically prevented from going after the steward and so on, but Jacks reaction only lasts for a few moments then it's all forgotten. Little Red has the same lack of reaction, the baker fails to react. The princes remain pretty much the same as do the the princesses. Characters disappear and die; but there is no character deveopment; nothing has a lasting impact on any of them.
Messing up is one thing; but it didn't develop the character. She does something that goes against all the songs and all the screentime she had had with the baker; which can be fine and drive the story, but it wasn't allowed to drive the story. In the next scene we learn that she was killed off-screen and nothing is ever mentioned about it again. Betrayal like that can be fine in a movie; but it has to be done with feeling; most commonly remourse, regret, anger, shame... but in order for feelings to work there has to be reasons for her character to do it. There is no buildup of romance; she isn't forced, she isn't roofied; she just decides to go against everything her character has done up till that point without any reason whatsoever. The same goes for the prince. He already had a song about his true love and so on; but he goes against everything we know about him to be unfaithful (and somehow Cinderella knows about this when they talk later because of... magic... because there are no shown reasons as to why she would know about it)
Continuing the story after the happy ending is a nice touch; but the story is flat. The witch is now an extra; Cinderella runs away from true love because... reasons... and all other characters in the realm dies. Oh, yes, and the giantess dies after an anticlimatic struggle.
I want a coherent story. It could be a story with a proper *beep* (Shutter Island, Hypercybe, etc.) The characters should act in accordance with their personalities and their experiences; this could also mean acting in an unpredictable way, betray others etc as long as it's woven into the story. The problem isn't the characters being flawed, the problem is the characters lacking any depth at all. The witch was pretty much the only one that actually did some changing throughout the story; and well, to bad she left the story as an active character 30 min before the ending.
If you dissect something for 30 years you can be fairly certain it's dead by now - which would be a fairly accurate description of the plot near the end of the movie. The problem with devotees is that they are devoted. If I wanted a sound review I'd rather listen to someone who isn't devoted to the movie being reviewed; I'd rather listen to someone who has watched a lot of movies and speaks with an open mind unclouded by devotion.
How does the Witch act against the Baker and his Wife? She's the one who sent them on the quest in the first place. She wants them to succeed.
I mentioned in my post how both the Baker's Wife and Cinderella's Prince have foreshadowing in the early half. Cinderella's Prince doesn't have a song about true love, he has a song about the thrill of the chase, as I'd mentioned above. The Baker's Wife has a song about her fascination with royalty. The dalliance with the Prince develops themes that are being explored throughout the piece, including what we think "happily ever after" ought to be and how frequently its not as pretty and perfect as fairy tales make it out to be. And if you think she didn't feel remorse, regret, shame, and even confusion, then you weren't listening to the song she sang immediately after. (And Cinderella is told by her birds that the Prince has been unfaithful.)
I'm not saying that you have to like it, though I am sorry you didn't. However, your claim that certain things were not carefully plotted out in the material is simply not true, as I have pointed out a few times. It's an extremely complex plot that first follows individuals working separately for their own selfish desires, which results in a chaos that can only be resolved when they learn to work together for the good of the group. It follows different types of parent/child relationships. And it tears down our expectations of fairy tales and happily-ever-after to a more realistic and human level.
Ok, there seems to be some confusion concerning words like "protagonist", "antagonist" and "act against". I'll try to explain them to you: The protagonist is the main person in the story, the most central one (could be more than one person, like for example the baker and his wife). The protagonist acts against the antagonist, or vice versa. Acting against, in this case, means that "one actor acts towards another actor" (or group of actors etc). (This is of course simplified, but when explaining it's often best to keep things simple) Though, in this case I would argue that the witch was the bad one who forced the characters to do certain things - and that it's irrelevant whether she wants them to succeed or not.
At 44:03 the prince starts singing of how Cinderella won his heart. 1:08:03 the prince says: "I would recognice these beautiful eyes anywhere. You. You are my true bride" The next scene we see the prince is at the wedding sharing a happy kiss with his bride. The next scene the bakers wife runs into him. They speak a bit about the giant on the loose, then he starts singing "anything can happen in the woods. May I kiss you?". So no, the prince doesn't work himself up to it; it's completely out of character for someone whose heart have been won, someone whose true bride has been found, someome who shared a loving kiss with his new wife. And yes, she was a bit confused afterwards; then she died. Had she come back to the story and actually acted in accordance to what she did it would be different, but she was killed off for no reason and noone really cared about her demise.
It would seem you have a point about Cinderella and the birds; and that makes sense but it still doesn't explain the random making out session.
I really don't know who Stephen Holden is, and I don't quite see what relevance he would have. You said "Many devotees feel that..."; a statement which could be true for anything. Let's give it a try "Many Scientologists believe their religion is the true one".
I don't think the plot is very complex. Each characters seems to have a single motivation; and once the goal of a character is fulfilled they pretty much disappear from the story. Though, I am curious, what gets solved by them working together? The giant walks up to the tree and gets a pebble in its head... if Jack had been alone in that tree he could still have fired the pebble at the giant, so I wouldn't say that them working together achieves anything; or are you referring to when the baker and his wife takes 173 steps in different directions and has out of character making out sessions with married men whose heart is won by his "true bride"?
From what you write I take it that you haven't read the stories written by Grimm (the originals, not the fluffy disney-adaptations). They are not fluffy and happy; a lot of the classic stories have morals like "if you don't obey your parents you will die", "if you are greedy you will suffer", "if you are dumb you will suffer" and so on. Though I have to give it that this is the first adaptation I've seen of Cinderella where the sisters actually cut their toes and heels off and are detected due to the dripping blood; so I would guess that the writer of Into the Woods actually read the original stories. As for tearing down the happily ever after... there are lots and lots of movies around that theme.
If you want a proper twist on the stories, with lots of singing and so on I suggest you watch Hoodwinked; in that you have several twists; and the characters at least have some depth.
Jack's Motherwas accidentally killed by the stewart for trying to keep them from giving the giantess info about Jack Baker's wife killed by Giantess right after her song following her encounter with the prince.