Bravo: I like the stark simplicity of it and the use of monochrome to begin with.
As a suggestion I can say that you might improve it by adding some "hints" for the audience on what to expect from such film, not too obvious ones I mean: just something subliminal, so to speak.
First thing I would work on the title font, maybe reserching on the original one is a start, as it stands it can be mistaken for an ordinary courtroom drama and, as we know it, it certainly isn't.
Maybe I would seek if there's another picture of Natalie, similar pose but different expression, although I have to say this one ain't too bad at all: infact I can't quite figure out if she's smiling or has a worried expression, and that's not a bad thing in my book.
That reflection on her eye gives me some ideas too...... I wonder if some "adjustment" can be made there.............
I hope that got you something,
good work!
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