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Check out my short film? Its not very long….

posted 11 years ago by skaros23
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I have a handful of youtube videos on my channel and would love to get some feedback on it. I wouldn't call it a "proper" short film, but I think it's pretty good.

thanks. its under two minutes.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dPvFI_R2glA

[–] killampeter 11 years ago

It has to go somewhere - lengthen the story so the viewer feels an itching feeling to figure it out. Pacing is key. Maybe the source to the high pitched frequency could be tested by the enigma. It is thought provoking and leaves you wondering what the source is.

[–] skaros23 11 years ago

Thanks for the feedback. Appreciate it.

[–] gtmail77 11 years ago

Why would you call this good? The noise is coming from the cup? Who cares? There's a big difference betwn mystery and confusion.

[–] ianprl 11 years ago

If it is supposed to be a short film it had better not be very long.

Or it will have failed before we even judge its cinematic qualities.