Narration
A lazy, easy way of getting information to an audience. Know who Lazy and Easy were? The eighth and ninth dwarves Walt Disney called into his office and said: "Guys...this isn't working out."
Don't TELL us what you can SHOW us instead. Isn't that Film 101? If you can't convey info through exposition, aren't you pretty much in the wrong effing business? Most of the narrative was stupid and unnecessary, anyway.
Not sure about the title, either.
Otherwise, liked it. Enjoyed the relationship between the principles.
Regards,
Ant