I just watched about 10 minutes on HBO today, I couldn't handle the bad dialog coupled with old and overused film clichés:
The typical primary characters: the white guy useless, women are commonsense, a black guy the scientist, and fat guys are stupid.
You need a filter on your writing
1 the black guy wasn't apscientist
2 what useless white guy
3 women are commonsense where the cliche?
When you actually watch the film you would enjoy to comically time lapsed represention of how life begins as a single cell and the theory how it morphes into multi cellular eventually to humans
Actually, women are not so common sense. Men are logical, women are emotional.
shareyo mommas bad dialog coupled with old and overused film clichés:
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