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The Haiku/Poem at the beggining: Help!


hello
ive started to write a story based in a ancient japanese universe consisting of clans and ninja tribes.
at the start of each chapter ive added a small samurai haiku to add more flavour to the book.
when i saw the film, although it was poor, i thought that the haiku about the butterfly at the beggining was really effective.
can anyone remember what the lines of text were.
thanks

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I don't recall the haiku, but I just felt I ought to mention that it's ninja clans, not tribes. If the ninja even existed in such a capacity.

In any case, if you're short on haiku you really should look into the first great, and possibly the most famous haiku poet in history: Basho Matsuo. Find haiku in Japanese if you can, because things will be lost in translation. For example:

Natsu-gusa ya
tsuwamono-domo ga
yume no ato.


The translations are plentiful, but here's the general idea:

Greenclad fields
are all that remains
of brave warriors' dreams.


Anyway, good luck on the story.

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thanks mate
it is right at the begginning of the film, before the training on the bridge

if you could direct me to some japanese haiku websites, i would be grateful

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I just checked, but couldn't see a haiku at the beginning of the film. There was a butterfly emerging though, but no poem of any kind. Are there differences between releases, perhaps?

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