That Dang Cassette Tape
When did Alice make it? Meaning, how did she get a tape to record on? I seriously doubt the walkman owner was flush with tapes.
And, how did she get it to Yankee Hank? She seemed totally surprised he had it. And why would you send a tape. A letter is much easier.
Just my two cents.
Unveiling my first ever signature... Now where did I set my drink?