Once Upon an Enchanted Rose


This in my new fic and I'm posting it everywhere. It is going to follow everyone.... MUAHAHAHAHAHAHAAH!! Beauty and the Beast lovers beware!!!!!!!!

Disclaimer: To start off with I own nothing. It would be stupid for me to say I did, everyone would know I was lying and if anyone was stupid enough to think I could actually make money off this, they are also a bit out of touch with the modern world. But it means something to me. I do own a few of the characters but they make very little difference and I'm not making any money off them either.

Authors Note: I would like to make a few notes before the story begins. I have had this little tale running through my head for almost a year now. I would like to get it properly on paper, so that it doesn't have to be in my head anymore. This beginning may be a little confusing for some people. The first three chapters of the story are basically to bring people up to speed with what is going on. It starts seventeen years after the spell is broken and you will see all the favorite characters (except Gaston, whom is still dead... Ce La Ve). I have named the prince Christian. Not really from anything and I'm completely aware that it is an English name but whenever I was little for as far as I can remember he has been named Christian and I don't think I could write any Beauty and the Beast story without him being my Christian. So if he's not exactly how
you pictured him... oh well. The rest of the characters were given names as well. I've never liked calling them by their last names: Cogsworth, Mrs. Potts. They had to have first names and so I gave them some. It's just to make the story more personal so don't get angry. If you are completely bored by this first chapter, I will post another boring chapter, and then another. Please keep reading, it's going to get really good. If you still hate it, tell all your friend to read it and you can form a club. But if you like it, tell all your friends and then you can write lots of fun reviews together. So either way, I would like to bring people together on mutual agreement. Okay? Good. And now with no more babbling...



It was morning. He noted it with an exasperated grunt and attempted to pull the

covers of his bedsheets over his face. He found this difficult as he had

completely twisted them over his body and entangled his long legs in the bottom

sheet. Again he grunted, knowing he should get up and face the day. It was going

to be a long one he was certain he would not enjoy it. "What was it that I'm

trying not to remember again?" he thought to himself as all the vague sleepiness

of the night was slipping away from him making it more and more impossible for

him to rest any longer. "Oh, yes." he whispered aloud as he slowly allowed his

eyes to flutter open. "I'm turning thirty-eight tomorrow....." He thought of

this with contempt, but it only lasted for a moment because he found that the

longer he tried to stay angry at time for going past so quickly, the more he

knew it would fly by quicker. He scanned his room as the daylight tendrils began

to fill it with the brightness of a new day. His evening suit from the previous

day had been taken from it's unceremonious place on the floor and laying nicely

in a chair next to his bed but a finely tailored tunic with matching breeches to

replace the clothes he had discarded the night before. He noted the leather

boots that lay on the floor next to it and could tell they had never been worn

because they were missing his normal holes and scratches. A cotton shirt was

folded on top of the tunic and to finish off the ensemble was a gold encrusted

crown struck with rubies and garnets. He looked away from his clothes and onto

his study. He had left piles of notes and quills scattered everywhere in a mess

of letters, pedigree charts, and family history that the servants knew full well

never to touch. Unwilling to think about anything of state at the moment he

turned himself over and tried to bury his face in his pillows. They were soft

and still warm from sleep. But as he was just finding comfort in his sprawled

state he felt the sun touch his bare skin. Starting with his shoulders and

extending to his lower back, it kissed his arms and neck in a tantalizing way

that clearly said 'Time to get up. Come outside and greet me'. With another

grunt he lifted his head and finally sat up. He had to admit, it was beautiful

outside. It would be a perfect morning to ride down through the orchards. No one

would be awake right now, except the servants who prepared breakfast and he

could avoid anyone easily. He looked around the room again, hugging his knees to

his chest. "Could I make it back in time?" he thought to himself. The prince of

Wales had arrived very late last night and he had spent a frenzied hour or two

preparing beds and meals for him as well as his twenty-odd servants, five

carriages, twenty-two horses and three hounds. Not that the king did not have

room for them all, but he had expected Prince Donovan to arrive next week and

had not been in a good humor to find the king (the prince' father) sending his

diligent so early.

With those thoughts he made up his mind and threw his covers

away from himself. If he was going to spend the rest of the day arguing points

of trivial nature to a boy of no more then eighteen just so he could get the

services of the King of Wales (Who didn't even have the decency to come himself)

to aid France then the least he could do for himself was take in the day and

make sure the sun still rose in the east. He walked past his stately attire to

his wardrobe which held much more suitable clothing for a spirit such as his.

Pulling out a torn pair of trousers, a clean cotton shirt, his old ridding

boots, a black riding vest and his leather gloves he threw them onto the bed one

by one. Then turning around before riffling through his dresser for a pair of

drawers he turned to the window and threw it open full scale to get a good look

at his lands that lay before him. He closed his eyes and extended his arms as

the sun reached out and touched every part of his bare body. Oh the feeling of

it was overwhelming... if only.....

He stopped himself. Opened his eyes and shook his head angrily. "You can't

start doing that again." He whispered to himself. "You're only hurting

yourself". He looked again to his lands and decided he would ride through the

orchards today. He had a new filly that was as high spirited as his attitude was

this morning and would take everything off his mind before he was to take on

"the beast" again.He turned to his bed and sighed. The feeling of overwhelming

loneliness was creeping back in, as if it knew he wasn't strong enough this

morning to brush it off with a wave and a nod. He walked again to his bed,

tiptoeing so that no servant or the like would hear that he was awake. He pulled

on his drawers first and then his trousers, realizing that he would have to

break in a new pair because the current ones held large holes a little too

close to the crotch for comfort. He pulled on his shirt and tied up the laces

loosely, his vest followed afterward. Taking his boots in his hand he crossed

the room to the other side of the bed. It was a massive one. Made of Cherry-wood

and Brass he had always loved its intricate carving on the head board and the

way the feet were created to look like a base of trees. It was large enough to

hold a family of eight but at the moment it seemed to hold nothing but cold

memories. He fought the loneliness as he leaned over and with the gentlest of

care smoothed the pillows on that side. It was the same every morning. He would

ensure that when he went to bed he would be too tired to think about the

absence, but in the morning it would all come rushing back to him, as if only

waiting for him to give it proper attention. "Oh, I miss you" he said softly to

the pillow. "I miss you and you're not even worlds away. Your just on the other

side of the corridor" Then with a rush of impatience he pulled on his boots and

tied his hair up loosely. It was neatly trimmed and sat regally on his

shoulders. If he left now, he knew he would be back in plenty of time to get

dressed and ready for his long day. Despite himself he glanced back once more.

The spot where his wife should have been sleeping still lay empty and as in

every morning he knew it wasn't some dream that she wasn't there. 'You have made

it that way' he would remind himself. But that didn't stop any kind of pain. It

would linger with him long throughout the day and finally till tonight when he

could throw himself onto his pillow, bare naked and exhausted till he would have

to face it again on the following morning. With this King Christian, leader of

France herself and husband to the most beautiful women this world had ever seen

Queen Belle, strode purposefully out the door and down to the stables to heal

his wounds on sunlight and the free wind.

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Oh God.. you posted this a long time ago, didn't you? Oh well. I shall still reply.

It's good, and you have nice descriptive wording in there.. but..

I don't think the Beast was the king of France. Why would the castle be so far away from regular people but close to a poor village? Plus, nobody came looking for the castle or what had happened to their "prince" so I highly doubt it.

:( Wah.. where's Belle? I'm confused.

Wanna see something really scary? *insert The Twilight Zone theme music here*

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The Beast's real name is Adam.

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Therefore, the Beast is how the Addams Family got started.

And 'cause' never was the reason for the evening,
--Or the Tropic of Sir Galahad.

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Yeah his name isn't Adam.

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Consider the daffodil. And while you're doing that I'll be over here looking through your stuff.

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While not in the animated feature,Disney's inclusion of the name Adam on select merchandise, and the placement of this name on a wall in certain princess-themed hotel rooms makes it canon.Employees at the Be Our Guest restaurant in Walt Disney World are told that Adam is indeed Beast's name.

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