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the Fan Writing Saga Thread and Creating a DM Saga


I think that Demolition Man should have an expanded universe. They could make the sequels but not expanded universe. This is a thread for fan writers to help me write an expanded universe. They don't have to all be on movie characters but also on characters that I or any of us created. Please reply here if any of you would like to write a Demolition Man saga.

There's www.fanfiction.net.

Legacy of San Angeles

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2352494/1/

A Moment Like This

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5878901/1/A_Moment_Like_This

Bon Appetit

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4424354/1/Bon_Appetit

Demolition Man 2: New Criminal Wars

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5218042/1/Demolition_Man_2

Demolition Man 3: The Next Demolition Man

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5218030/1/Demolition_Man_3_The_Beginning

All entries on the movie to also the novelization and 4 part comic book adaption...

http://boards.theforce.net/threads/demolition-man-entries.50015706/

Remake Trilogy

http://boards.theforce.net/threads/movie-remakes.50015708/

Also with the Demolition Man remake ideas there are ideas for a remake of the Running Man followed by a sequel and Jesse Ventura was with Arnold Schwarzenegger in the Running Man. There's a remake entry that's remaking a classical long forgotten cartoon villain Pincushion Man.

There's all of my entries on the original film starring Sylvester Stallone and Wesley Snipes.

There's also the ideas wiki on this link below...

http://ideas.wikia.com/wiki/Idea_Wiki

How many of you people assumed 2 of the 6 cryo-cons freed by Simon Phoenix (one of them was played by Jesse "The Body" Ventura) were eliminated by the cryo-prison blown up as they simply vanished near the end?

http://www.dailyscript.com/scripts/demolition-man_production.html

If it went by this draft maybe there could be side stories on Denis Leary's character. One of the cryo-cons to try to jump and him and got shot falling to his death below the support grid. Maybe then during the road chase the surviving cryocons who fight Lenina Huxley and John Spartan are fighting armed rebels while one of them fights Denis Leary's character when he name was Thomas Payne. They think to have killed the scraps and their leader.

Sequels or prequels won't happen but could be just left as fan fiction.

In the comic book adaption to the sequel there could be flashback in the first battle of part 2 with armed scraps fighting cryocon henchmen and Simon Phoenix himself and Edgar Friendly kills Beppo a cryocon with 2032 in the box and then flash over to back to 20 years later.

In the novelization they could have flashbacks of on the way to the cryo-prison when Alfredo Garcia kills Adam (the Cocteau killer played by Jesse Ventura) while armed scraps kill a quarter of Simon Phoenix's criminal army being freed.

http://villains.wikia.com/wiki/Simon_Phoenix

There's a Demolition Man script below. I could've had less on side story ideas then.

http://www.dailyscript.com/scripts/demolition-man_production.html

If I were to write ideas for side stories there is after John Spartan kills the cryocon named Albert and this is if the movie went by that draft as one of them lies dead when Spartan chased Phoenix back into the large cavern as Charlie lies dead there would be Thomas Payne pursuing Charlie to the large cavern support grid make the move to step on him. Thomas Payne would shoot Charlie blowing him away while the armed scraps battling those cryo-cons who survive disappear. One of them reappears and is killed by John Spartan. This could be then Chief Earle discovers Raymond Cocteau killed.

This is from cutting out scenes in the movie to when the scraps twice battle the cryo-cons (including that one played by Jesse Ventura as the Sylvester Stallone vs. Jesse Ventura fight was cut out).

It's a talking about my entry I read the scripts available for access. I have the trading cards. I also listened to audio commentary on the DVD. Maybe there are a couple of men already released that were gang members convicted of murder to a warlord killed by then by John Spartan. They were friends with Simon Phoenix just as there were gang leaders in league with Simon Phoenix as one guy was leader of the bloods and another head of the yakuza.

At the final battle at the cryo-prison it said everyone else was wiped out or killed. The first thing he says when meeting with John Spartan again is asking to have apprehended Simon Phoenix just as Chief Earle had learned Simon Phoenix had his gang off Raymond Cocteau for him. I had the idea that one cryo-con after knocked out gets back up and is killed by Alfredo Garcia on his way to the cryo-prison while the 2 others were indeed eliminated by the cryo-prison blown up.

There are updates. There are fan fiction thoughts posted on a link that shows ideas for more related to the movie or what ifs.

There are a couple of posts to both the movie and ideas for a remake saga.

https://www.fanfiction.net/topic/4954/4832652/1/Fandom-Thoughts-and-Writers-Out-there

You could look on this link.

I've seen this movie at least a hundred times and it keeps getting better. While the story line was nothing beyond the usual action film gun totting good guy (Stallone) vs. evil psychotic bad guy (Snipes) the social and technological concepts covered in this film really make a person think what could be accomplished & avoided in creating a more peaceful society.

It would be interesting to see a prequel movie or book based on the forming of San Angeles and characters like Chief Earle, Mayor-Gov Raymond Cocteau and Warden William Smithers, but I don't think this movie did well enough at the box office for this to become a reality.

If you are into Stallone films this may not be his best one, but if you are into Utopian Ideals of future societies then this is the movie for you.

I did some spelling corrections. I submitted my own review on Demolition Man myself and there are many good reviews like thinking that there should be a prequel or sequel.

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This all gets left as fan fiction as Demolition Man wasn't as popular as the Terminator Films or Star Wars. 15 chapters to Legacy of San Angeles. You fans have my permission to follow mine. There could be 3 books of short stories as they are prequel, midquel and interquel/sequel. My entry on all those Demolition Man short story ideas of mine is called Legacy of San Angeles. There could be a novel trilogy like there are books like Eragon, Eldest, Brisinger and Inheritance in the Eragon saga.

Prequel Short Story Ideas

https://www.fanfiction.net/s/2352494/1/Legacy-of-San-Angeles [U]Demo Man Begins[/U]

https://www.fanfiction.net/s/2352494/2/Legacy-of-San-Angeles [U]Satanic Cops[/U]

https://www.fanfiction.net/s/2352494/3/Legacy-of-San-Angeles [U]The Hunt for Simon Phoenix[/U]

https://www.fanfiction.net/s/2352494/4/Legacy-of-San-Angeles [U]Criminal Wars Part 1[/U]

https://www.fanfiction.net/s/2352494/5/Legacy-of-San-Angeles [U]Start of the Cryo-Prison[/U]

https://www.fanfiction.net/s/2352494/6/Legacy-of-San-Angeles [U]Bagging a Criminal Army[/U]

Midquel Short Story Ideas

https://www.fanfiction.net/s/2352494/7/Legacy-of-San-Angeles [U]War On Crime[/U]

https://www.fanfiction.net/s/2352494/8/Legacy-of-San-Angeles [U]Criminal Wars Part 2[/U]

https://www.fanfiction.net/s/2352494/9/Legacy-of-San-Angeles [U]A Time for Starting Over[/U]

https://www.fanfiction.net/s/2352494/10/Legacy-of-San-Angeles [U]Rise of the Rebellion[/U]

https://www.fanfiction.net/s/2352494/11/Legacy-of-San-Angeles [U]Starting a New Crime Syndicate[/U]

https://www.fanfiction.net/s/2352494/12/Legacy-of-San-Angeles [U]Simon Phoenix's New Criminal Gang[/U]

Interquel/Sequel Short Story Ideas

https://www.fanfiction.net/s/2352494/13/Legacy-of-San-Angeles [U]The Spartan Legacy[/U]

https://www.fanfiction.net/s/2352494/14/Legacy-of-San-Angeles [U]Spartan's Special Legacy[/U]

https://www.fanfiction.net/s/2352494/15/Legacy-of-San-Angeles [U]Lisa Earle[/U]

Bon Appetit (sequel/interquel)

https://www.fanfiction.net/s/4424354/1/Bon-Appetit

A Moment Like This (sequel/interquel)

https://www.fanfiction.net/s/5878901/1/A-Moment-Like-This

Maybe there could be books of short stories. I have written 2 sequels that are Demolition Man 2: New Criminal Wars and Demolition Man 3 The next Demolition Man.

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I have made updates like on the cast of the fan fiction. All this is to be left as fan fiction. Still no new Demolition Man entries.

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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uK21fcjY9a0

There's the exploring. Maybe both a prequel and sequel were written years ago. Part 2 I heard on here was to be a prequel. So maybe part 3 a sequel. There could've been the prequel 2 decades ago. Someone put in a review on some character novels and a story about the forming of San Angeles like in books or comics. I was thinking more comic book side stories to extend roles of the minor characters to where Denis Leary's character and his armed followers are the main characters. Maybe on the way to the cryo-prison most of the rebels encounter those who turned their backs on them and a cryocon that Sandra Bullock's character knocked out gets back up and is killed by the Benjamin Bratt character. Also there could be side stories with Denis Leary's character and his armed followers battling the Wesley Snipes played villain's criminal gang and they kill 2 cryocon henchmen. There could be at the building of the cryo-prison during the final Sylvester Stallone vs. Wesley Snipes battle Troy Evans character with who ever is the assistant police chief or otherwise captain teaming with a couple of written out scraps fighting even the Jesse Ventura character just as the Sylvester Stallone vs. Jesse Ventura fight is cut out. Maybe then 2 written out scraps throw the 2 cryocons into the explosion. They show Sandra Bullock's character killing a cryocon. Many of us assume all 6 of the cryocons dead at the very end.

I have read scripts to the film. Originally Denis Leary's character has with him 6 of his followers aiming the guns at Sylvester Stallone's character, Sandra Bullock's character and Benjamin Bratt's character but it's 4 of them. Also there's underground people in Simon Phoenix's new criminal gang as those 2 written out freedom fighters battle them. Many are assuming 2 of the 6 cryocons already unfrozen not seen again (including the Jesse Ventura character) are eliminated when the cryo-prison was blown up.

I can't find anywhere a prequel or sequel script.

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Still no new entries on this film. Hopefully soon. There was planned a prequel and sequel years ago.

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More to write in fan fiction is that the surviving gang members of the earlier 1990's or from 1980's work for Simon Phoenix's criminal friends Henry Yates, CryoCon Elvin, CryoCon Francis and Howie who is part of the criminal army in the future to be unfrozen by Simon Phoenix. John Spartan made 1,000 arrests in 3 years as many of those criminals could be freed by Simon Phoenix and his criminal gang to form a criminal empire. There could be talks of that in sequel stories in between the original film and Part 2. There could even in those stories be flashbacks with Sonny Lindy shown more with his gang before Simon Phoenix became a hunted criminal.



People clearly assume at the end of the film after John Spartan kills Simon Phoenix that 2 of the 6 CryoCons not seen anymore after the killing of Raymond Cocteau are eliminated by the cryo-prison blown up so I put in ideas on how it could work the story "Simon Phoenix's new criminal gang". That's in the idea of a side story on the rebels.



I read scripts to the movie and the novelization and comic book adaption. I know there's a scene cut out in the film when John Spartan fights Jesse Ventura's character. Jesse Ventura plays the cryo-con Adam. 2 of the 6 already released as we figured them either killed or incapacitated in the Wasteland battle are leaders of the Yakuza and the Bloods. In the novelization and comic book adaptation Denis Leary's character Edgar Friendly kills one of the Six Cryo-Cons while John Spartan kills the Japanese American old enemy to him. There Lenina Huxley kills that cryocon in the movie she knocked out just as the cryocon killed by Lenina Huxley is killed by John Spartan breaking his back. Just before that 2 on 2 battle John Spartan kills that same one who kicked the chair out of the way in throwing the dead Cocteau into the fire.



In the novelization Jesse Ventura's character is left unresolved but we'll assume he was the thug shot in the forehead by John Spartan when he fired back at Si

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No more fan fiction this movie. I was expecting it as there were Taco Bell ads for Franchise Wars.

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