Two things I didn't see clearly
When Owen is returning from bowling and the police are at his house, he doesn't want to let them in, but then he sees something at the bottom of the door that changes his mind. What is it?
There's also a point when Larry's attempting to leave, but he hears sirens and sees the police right outside. What does he see when he looks out the window? Were the police arresting one of the neighbors for a completely unrelated crime?
Being inconsistent is better than being consistently bad.