Too 'mannered' and unreasonably in love with its own dialogue to work...
... made all the worse by the fact that this comes from a Mamet knockoff trying badly to impersonate the man himself by adapting his play! That the film continues after about 20mins is seemingly a consequence of runtime necessity and nothing more. If they're so smugly assured about their romantic entanglements, then tell me why I should care? I mean, could the lines be more trite, at times??????!:
"It's been a slice of heaven"
&
"I love making love with you"
... Ugh.
It's 'wordy' all right... Trouble is, it just doesn't possess the words! 2/10.
You gave me a glimpse of real life, then told me to carry on with falsity.