A better ending


At the very end we see Poole yelling at Hardin to wake up - the whole movie has been Hardin's dreaming.

Next Poole yells at him to get up as the patrol is leaving - close up of panic look on Hardin's face - fade to end.

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Sorry, I can't agree with you. That ending seems pretty lame to me.

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Right! That's why I've added to it.

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No offense but what I'm saying is that your alternate ending seems pretty lame.

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The whole 'it was only a dream in the end' scenario is a poor tool for weak writing.

It's only my opinion. Climb down.

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Er, that is kind of cliche.

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Only way to make sense of an illogical story

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