Story 1: (spoiler)
When did the sister become a vampire?
I am (potentially) feeling pleased with myself about this, but I need to clarify what the deal was with the sister. Was she a vampire all along, or did she become one when her brother killed her? If she was a vampire all along, why was she warning her brother about "them"?
If not, she was very pally with "them" when she joined them for a drink of her brother's blood, considering she had just become one of them.
My main point is that she had a reflection! In the glass of a cabinet in her house when her brother arrives.
Do I get a Crackerjack pencil? (Crackerjack!)
My body makes no moan
But sings on:
All things remain in God.