Battle of Britain - Second Flight (The fanedit)
An edit which streamlines the original film by removing the tedious and distracting love sub-plot of Colin and Maggie Harvey. Both characters are still featured and are acknowledged to be a couple, but they never get to meet up this time around.
A few additional trims have been made to improve pacing, these include:
Removal of the attack on the French airbase before Dowding meets the Under-Secretary of State for Air, short clips of which now play silently as he walks along the hall.
Extraneous bits of conversation, typically exposition that can be inferred from other bits of dialogue.
Other parts of scenes that feel as if they run too long, mostly parts at the beginnings and ends of scenes.
Some additional stylistic changes have been made too:
Desaturated nearly the entire film, lifting shadows brightness and increasing contrast to make image less flat
This (perhaps counter-intuitively) takes away a layer of artificiality, making the film feel less like a glossy (for 1969) production and a bit more like the contemporary footage one sees of the WWII period, helps also to disguise how lousy the Blu-ray transfer is!
Single exception is the Battle of the Air sequence towards the end, fades into colour (with increased shadow brightness) over the shot of St Paul's and hard cuts to monochrome after the final crash, makes this atypically presented scene stand out even more. It helps that there are no famous faces visible during this time to subconsciously remind one this is a narrative feature, for a few minutes the film becomes pure cinema.
Covered coloured bars (above and below text) during opening credits with solid white equivalents, recoloured "Battle" and "Britain" white too
Mixed together audio from the William Walton and Ron Goodwin soundtracks to my preference (e.g. Walton opening credits but Goodwin end credits). Three soundtrack options, the hybrid, Walton-only and Goodwin-only.
https://fanedit.org/forums/threads/battle-of-britain-second-flight.28558/