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John Cheever's story was way better


I read Cheever's story and I must say, I found it to be a great read. The movie made me feel even worse and even more depressed. The movie added unnecessary things to pad the story and the movie also subjected the protagonist to so much more abuse. It was really terrible. There were some scenes in the movie that I really hated and I found they were not in the story. They also decided to make Ned Merrill worse off than he was in the story and way more pathetic. You can get the point of what's going on reading the story. The movie gave us too much information at times and he was treated so much worse by people. Especially in the end. That whole scene of the people verbally abusing him about his daughters was terrible. Too bad John Cheever didn't have more input on the script. There was also a very important part of the story that they decided to leave out in the movie. Ned's journey, as someone pointed out on here, did not take place in one afternoon. His journey in the story takes place over many afternoons. Time is going by, seasons are changing, and things in Ned's life are getting worse. But he can't see it. As far as Ned knows in his state, it's still the same summer afternoon and everything is fine. In the story he doesn't know why it's getting darker sooner, why it's so cold, and why people are acting so differently towards him. Then in the end he finally comes face to face with what's really going on. In this case, less is more. Cheever's story was better.

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John Cheever actually initially planned it as a novel but eventually reduced it down to a short story despite pages and pages of notes he'd made regarding the novel. So yes. Less is more, especially in this case

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<<There was also a very important part of the story that they decided to leave out in the movie. Ned's journey, as someone pointed out on here, did not take place in one afternoon. His journey in the story takes place over many afternoons. Time is going by, seasons are changing, and things in Ned's life are getting worse.>>

That explains why he was being treated worse and worse the closer he got to home. The movie left you wondering.

Were his rich friends/old friends more discreet and polite? More supportive? Classier? Was any of that by virture of their wealth, their decadence, their history? Were they as blissfully ignorant of the facts as he was?

I never knew and it was a problem for me.

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The Cheever story clearly takes place over the course of many afternoons.

The movie does not, in my opinion. It's more like a "literal version" of the story, one that follows the plot yet somehow takes place in a single day.

It just happened to be that those friends further away from his home knew less about how messed up his life actually was. The fact that he was delusional didn't help.

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