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Help me Add something to my story a line or two.. or tips.


story is basically about a girl and a boy ... girl wear hijab and white clothes and boy white clothes.

they come together to stop the repitlian invasion.....

then a reptilian church.................

i did tell you about a heaven scene :)

is there anything you can add or recommend ...

thanks :)

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Everybody loves a happy ending.

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Except the masseur.

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Depends on the money.

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I love true stories!

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Stick a car chase in ! Using white cars ! Also lots of white goats ! And 77 virgins in heaven dressed in white ! David Icke makes a guest appearance dressed in turquoise ! J K Rowling and the Watchoutski Sisters have a sword fight while on fire off the shoulder of Orion !


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This b8 is too obvious. It has the right flavor for biting but the hook is visible.

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Stolen jewelry in a pawn shop

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one of the reptiles is a turn-coat, has a secret love for us inherently loveable humanoids, and the couple rides him to their hideyhole & starts a 5th column among the reptiloids, ultimately winning the day, whereupon the humans kill all the reptiloids, except our allies, who get put in a zoo. the end.

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Add a few musical numbers, at least one song by Ariana Grande* and another by Dua Lipa*.

* ElSofoqueDos approved

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