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How can I improve this image?

posted 7 years ago by aliensalmon (5855)
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I made this image with a program called Daz 3D Studio. I have the feeling that it needs some improvement...either technically or artistically....

https://www.daz3d.com/galleryimage/image/535966/melissa-and-rachel-at-the-beach_full.png

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[–] Skullomania (483) 7 years ago

Remove the clothing :D

Seriously though. The light on the girls is a lot warmer and brighter than the light on the rest of the scene. You could try adjusting it.

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[–] aliensalmon (5855) 7 years ago

Ah, that's good advice! Thanks!

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[–] Frogarama (12942) 7 years ago

The clothing was my first thought too

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[–] PeteRose (2893) 7 years ago

Not sure if it's lighting or what, but the skin textures don't seem right, too similar to the sand and everything else

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[–] aliensalmon (5855) 7 years ago

Thanks! I'll keep that in mind.

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[–] TexasJack (12516) 7 years ago

Nice work!

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[–] aliensalmon (5855) 7 years ago

Thank you!

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[–] PeteRose (2893) 7 years ago

I also might compose them a little differently, not so posed for a photograph but captured in a moment. It seems sort of European, so maybe tops off? If you do that it would only be fair to have a naked guy in there too, but that's just me :)

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[–] aliensalmon (5855) 7 years ago

OK, I'll keep that in mind. Thanks!

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[–] croft_alice (12180) 7 years ago

Why am i not surprised😎 anyway,try to reduce the light a bit and add some colour to the skin.

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[–] aliensalmon (5855) 7 years ago

Thank you for the advice!

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[–] croft_alice (12180) 7 years ago

Anytime👍

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