Anyone wanna read a sample of my screenplay?

Personally I'm satisfied, actually I really like the flow of the script, but perhaps there's something I've overlooked, I'd love your opinion on this fellow IMDB members.

Happy new year!

Working Title:
'Orfano'

PLOT:

Cali, a 17 year old orphan, has a seemingly normal life, until Sister Barbara starts getting mysterious calls, and Sister Anna gets murdered at an event downtown.
Cali runs away from the orphanage to go on a personal mission;
finding his mentor's killer.
He contacts local witnesses, and with a network of outcasts he gets closer to unraveling the mystery, but gets so caught up in his obsession that he's starting to lose his mind.
Three years later, he comes back to Desha city, and the killer sent him a disturbing package...

http://www.scribd.com/doc/195036516/Screenplay-ORFANO?secret_password= 40hd08f1ofy2ngr7404


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