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read and rate please!

posted 10 years ago by mercado_emily
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Hello. I write stories to pass time. Although my first one has teenagers as target market, it will never hurt if mature readers can glance through it too. Please have a look and rate how did I do. here is the link http://internetstories.blogspot.ca/

[–] sarizonana 10 years ago

Hey just read your story and looks pretty good, especially because of your average looking girl is not a skinny plain Jane in the style of Bella swan.
Everything looks more realistic and relatable to young girls.

Keep the good work.

[–] mercado_emily 10 years ago

thanks!